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Joined: 20 Apr 2004
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I was looking at the VixineTales comic, and I figured out some suggestions to slowly evolve it to be less, well, tacky... of course there is the thing with pacing the story to build up so we care about the characters, and the sex and stuff (I mean, looking at the RPG plot in the "just another adventure", I see the PERFECT pacing and development of a plot, all laid out nicely and building up to appropriate sex scenes..), but also, there is the way the comic is drawn. To me, it seems a bit more cartoony than Vixine, and I was wondering if you all could try drawing the anatomy (in _all_ areas) to be less exaggerated, and even a bit more animalistic? You know, a bit less Barbie-ish, and take more cues from the anatomy of the animals... how about male genitilia thats less human looking and more furryish? (ie, the tip is different, the placement of the testes is different, having an actual SHEATHE...)
A lot of what I think people like about furry erotica is that it is _different_ from normal erotica, and so far, you guys are going for it to be the same... put some romance, some pacing, some buildup in this... and some nonhuman anatomy too!  |
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