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| General Forum -> General Discussions ~ He'll Return. The Mechanical Dragon Story |
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Fri Sep 07, 2012 8:37 pm
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| Who returns? Some dude said that he will return, making like a full year return since his last adventure. He said The Blue Dragon will return for one more show. So I decide to post about his return, in return I get a free soda. 'What a deal.' Beside, he even said it will be on this October. So much of hard work, like really. I really died and relive to continue this story, pretty much a hard work to come up with a 'controversial story.' It really hurts to think new ideas, even the rewriting parts. I hope I do a good job once again. And I really would like some good feedback at least. And this soda he gave me taste like Dragon Fruit. 'Yum.' Once again, he'll return one more time, like making him do more crazy stuff than before. New characters, new place, new hell, 'for him.' And pretty much, out of the best imagination I could possibly try. Thinking too much really hurts, like I can't sleep well since I started this new story. But I hope it's worth it and your time. |
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Fri Sep 07, 2012 9:41 pm
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Sat Sep 08, 2012 3:01 pm
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Sun Sep 09, 2012 4:49 am
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| All I heard was Blue Dragon./ |
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Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:46 pm
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| The hint is from the adult stories, from my stories, the subject title should give you the answer of who will return. |
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Sun Sep 09, 2012 9:59 pm
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Sun Sep 16, 2012 10:01 pm
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| Nevermind. Just saying, I'm almost done and remastering my other Blue Dragon stories. Making it a bit more sense and focus instead of too much of it's kind. |
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Tue Oct 02, 2012 6:30 pm
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| Update: I will try to be finish by Late October of Early November. |
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Thu Oct 04, 2012 7:02 pm
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| I'm confused...by looking at the title and the username I thought. Terminator thread, haven't seen those in ages, this shall be fun to read... |
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Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:33 pm
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| Update: The story is almost done. Hope it can be done in time for Halloween. Just want to wish the best for the story. I don't care if you like it or not, it just needs to be out there for the viewers. Please god help me. |
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Mon Oct 22, 2012 11:28 am
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Urgent Update: I'm very sorry, deeply sorry! Theres going to be a delay. From a asshole who likes to ruin things very much!
I'm sorry, it will be held back and I promise you to give you this story as soon as possible. Again, I'm sorry. |
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Sat Nov 03, 2012 6:21 pm
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UPDATE!!!
The story is here!!!!
Act 1 is release. Act 2 coming soon. And artwork will be available to view here on this forum coming soon.
I hope you enjoy it. |
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Tue Nov 06, 2012 8:12 am
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UPDATE!!!
The story is here!!!! Now in the Adult Jokes/Humor & Erotic Stories section.
Act 1 is release. Act 2 coming soon. And artwork will be available to view here on this forum coming soon.
I hope you enjoy it |
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Tue Nov 06, 2012 8:24 am
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I may have some idea for putting music that makes you feel in the story. Like radio music type of thing. Just wondering if thats a good idea.
Any comments about this idea? |
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Sat Nov 17, 2012 8:58 am
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| The ACT 2 story will be done in the end of November. |
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Fri Nov 30, 2012 3:09 pm
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Update
Something is wrong, having some issue here. I'll fix it. |
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Fri Nov 30, 2012 3:26 pm
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| Guess my story is too long. I'm sorry for this crap. Wish I can delete the forum right now. I'll figure it out soon. |
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Fri Nov 30, 2012 3:33 pm
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I'm going to halt on the story for the moment.
Sorry. |
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Fri Nov 30, 2012 7:15 pm
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| I don't think anyone hates it. |
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Sat Dec 01, 2012 8:49 am
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Its not that, its because the limit of the letters in this typing box. Its just a 1 of 5 of Act 2. So my story is very long.
Didn't know there was a space limit. |
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Sat Dec 01, 2012 9:10 am
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| And I fix the problem. The story continues!! |
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Sat Dec 01, 2012 10:21 am
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ACT 3 will be out next year. Hope this story is good as I can even think about how a good story is.
Arts and drawing coming soon still. |
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Mon Jan 28, 2013 10:07 am
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ACT 3 is out!!!!
The final act in the story.
Now in the Adult Jokes/Humor & Erotic Stories section
Feel free to comment about it or review it.
Artwork is coming soon.
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